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Smell of the storm by ~silima13:iconsilima13:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Animals

©2009 ~silima13
:iconsilima13:

Artist's Comments

Eső esik. Fölszárad. Nap süt. Ló nyerít.
Nézd a világ apró rebbenéseit.

Egy műhely mélyén lámpa ég, macska nyávog,
vihogva varrnak felhőskörmü lányok.

Uborkát esznek. Harsan. S csattog az olló.
Felejtik, hogy hétfő s kedd oly hasonló.

A sarkon túl egy illatszerárus árul,
a hitvesét is ismerem szagárul.

Elődje vén volt már. Meghalt. S mint bárki mást,
csak elfeledték. Akár a gyökvonást.

Feledni tudnak jól. A tegnapi halott
szíveikben mára szé.pen megfagyott.

Egy ujságlap repül: most csákót hord a szél.
Költőt is feledtek. Ismerem. Még él.

Még kávéházba jár. Látom hébe-korba,
sötét ruhája, válla csupa korpa.

Mit írjak még e versben? Ejtsem el talán,
mint vén levelét a vetkező platán?

Hisz úgyis elfelejtik. Semmi sem segít.
Nézd a világ apró rebbenéseit.

/Radnóti Miklós, 1941/


Done with 5B pencil in 2 hours, and I don't remember where is the ref.photo from... sorry.

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:iconjessehenley:
Mood: Wow! *jessehenley Oct 5, 2009, 9:42:20 PM
Very beautiful Piece, it is so perfect very very realistic I love your work..

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Jesse Henley
:iconsilima13:
~silima13 Oct 5, 2009, 9:43:26 PM
Thank you so much for the comment! :)

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Of yellow leaves and gossamer
in autumns that there were,
with morning mist and silver sun
and wind upon my hair.
:iconmilkwood:
~Milkwood Oct 5, 2009, 9:52:55 PM
Oh, beautiful. :clap: They look so wild and free. The horses are brilliant, but if you do take critics I think that perhaps the mist doesn't quite behave as mist really does. Below the head of the front horse, especially, it seems as though it is outlining the horse rather than doing its own misty thing. Does that kind of make sense? :hmm:

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Little Lottie thought of everything and nothing
:iconsilima13:
~silima13 Oct 5, 2009, 9:59:38 PM
Thanks a lot for the comment! You're right, that mist isn't mist, I have always had problem with drawing of translucent things... :p

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Of yellow leaves and gossamer
in autumns that there were,
with morning mist and silver sun
and wind upon my hair.
:iconmilkwood:
~Milkwood Oct 5, 2009, 10:04:09 PM
Yes, it is hard. Something I have tried is drawing the mist first, and also afterwards... but the best thing is to forget that you want everyone to see the so-beautiful horse you have drawn, and just make the picture. =)

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Little Lottie thought of everything and nothing
:iconsilima13:
~silima13 Oct 5, 2009, 10:06:43 PM
Thank you, I'll try it! :) :sun:

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Of yellow leaves and gossamer
in autumns that there were,
with morning mist and silver sun
and wind upon my hair.
:iconmilkwood:
~Milkwood Oct 5, 2009, 10:09:18 PM
No problem. Maybe it will help.

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Little Lottie thought of everything and nothing
:iconrosegirouard:
Mood: Wow! *rosegirouard Oct 5, 2009, 10:11:40 PM
The horses are beautiful! Very good proportions. You also have a very good style...keep up the good work!!

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If you can believe the end of the world is near, then why can't you believe you should fall on your knees?
:iconsilima13:
~silima13 Oct 5, 2009, 10:14:17 PM
Thank you very much! :)

--
Of yellow leaves and gossamer
in autumns that there were,
with morning mist and silver sun
and wind upon my hair.
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